Our Picnic at Eastern Beach
On Monday 4th March all my school went to Eastern Beach for a picnic. It was cloudy and hot and cold because the wind was blowing. I went in the bus with my friends and my teacher.
I went in a kayak. I had lots of fun. I was a little bit scared because I have not been there before. I was swimming lots to keep warm. I played with a ball in the water and my friends splashed me. I had lots of fun swimming. After that I played cricket with my friends and we made lots of noise. We had fun playing that game.
When the day finished we went back to school on the bus. I was tired because I was running and swimming a lot. We all had a fun day at Eastern Beach.
6 comments:
Hi Pah Nwee
I really like the way you described what you were
feeling and really great to see you had a great time
even with a band aid on your head ''TRUE SURVIVOR''
Hey Pah Nwee
Its liked yours alot, I like the way you described things of what you did and you really steped up, great job.
I like how brave you were going in a Kayak for the first time.
Glad you had a great day.
from Dontalian
Hi Pah Nwee
I really enjoyed reading your recount. It looks like you had lots of fun when you were kayaking and at the beach. Your recount is really great. Keep up the awesome writing.
From
Asmah
Hi Pah Nwee
I really like reading your recount. It has really good detail. Keep up the good work.
From
Isaac
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